Tuesday, June 27, 2006

Meaninfull Poem

This is for all of you that write poems that don't rhyme.


I see your face reflected in a puddle,
the light from your eyes sings to me like an opera in the clouds,
you say my name as beautuful as a poem full of italicized words,
I think to myself what bad analagies people use when writing those poems,
then i see another face reflected in the same puddle,
and it makes my eyes go dark, like a lightbulb burning out,
i scream your name but you don't answer me, like a deaf mute,
i curse the name of the other face, like a psychic who know's the name of someone he's never seen before,
but it's too late, that face takes yours away, like a river of tears,
then i realize that when i'm looking at the puddle i'm looking at myself, like a mirror,
and your face is the reflection of what is in my soul, like a photograph,
and the other guys face is my fears, like a jealous guy,
i scream out to you, and a big napkin comes and wipes away my tears, like kleenex,
then i look up and i see you holding the napkin, your hands like metal robotic pinchers, only with skin instead of metal,
you say my name, and then i realize that we've said each others name 4 or 5 times already,
you smile at me, and my fears melt away, like ice cream in a microwave,
i pick you up and carry you away, like superman.

Jesse Bruni


9 Comments:

At 10:41 AM, Blogger Class Clown said...

That poem only deservs 3 words.... what the hell?

 
At 9:09 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

It's beautiful.

It made me laugh. It made me cry.

It says puddle numerous times.

I like it.

 
At 10:12 PM, Blogger Blog God said...

for the record (or any slow ppl who don't know my humor) this isn't a "serious" poem. This was written as a parody on those poems that dont rhyme, which i am not too fond of.

 
At 9:40 PM, Blogger Xact Claims Services said...

ahahhhaha.

That was funny .... "like a" funny clown.

 
At 8:28 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hilarious! Very, very funny!

 
At 4:58 PM, Blogger Class Clown said...

I knew it was a Joke when you started explain EVERYTHING, like I am now...

 
At 5:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

That for the record comment, wasn't to me was it?
I hope not, because for the record...I knew that.
That's why it made me cry....out.
which then lead me to comment.

But you knew that.

 
At 4:34 PM, Blogger Xact Claims Services said...

very off the subject...ZONK! But heres another off the subject--> when will you post something new? When will you start posting regularly?

 
At 7:10 PM, Blogger whacky said...

haha! Loved it!! Genious in a very strange way!

 

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