Meaninfull Poem
This is for all of you that write poems that don't rhyme.
I see your face reflected in a puddle,
the light from your eyes sings to me like an opera in the clouds,
you say my name as beautuful as a poem full of italicized words,
I think to myself what bad analagies people use when writing those poems,
then i see another face reflected in the same puddle,
and it makes my eyes go dark, like a lightbulb burning out,
i scream your name but you don't answer me, like a deaf mute,
i curse the name of the other face, like a psychic who know's the name of someone he's never seen before,
but it's too late, that face takes yours away, like a river of tears,
then i realize that when i'm looking at the puddle i'm looking at myself, like a mirror,
and your face is the reflection of what is in my soul, like a photograph,
and the other guys face is my fears, like a jealous guy,
i scream out to you, and a big napkin comes and wipes away my tears, like kleenex,
then i look up and i see you holding the napkin, your hands like metal robotic pinchers, only with skin instead of metal,
you say my name, and then i realize that we've said each others name 4 or 5 times already,
you smile at me, and my fears melt away, like ice cream in a microwave,
i pick you up and carry you away, like superman.
Jesse Bruni
9 Comments:
That poem only deservs 3 words.... what the hell?
It's beautiful.
It made me laugh. It made me cry.
It says puddle numerous times.
I like it.
for the record (or any slow ppl who don't know my humor) this isn't a "serious" poem. This was written as a parody on those poems that dont rhyme, which i am not too fond of.
ahahhhaha.
That was funny .... "like a" funny clown.
Hilarious! Very, very funny!
I knew it was a Joke when you started explain EVERYTHING, like I am now...
That for the record comment, wasn't to me was it?
I hope not, because for the record...I knew that.
That's why it made me cry....out.
which then lead me to comment.
But you knew that.
very off the subject...ZONK! But heres another off the subject--> when will you post something new? When will you start posting regularly?
haha! Loved it!! Genious in a very strange way!
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